I used to be an Obama fan,
And then he brought up Pakistan.
My homeland he wants to invade,
This in turn has made me afraid.
His decision and comments were quite offensive,
Not to mention his plan sounds expensive.
“If Pakistan does not fully commit to helping the USA,
It’s then that military force will be displayed.”
He did not say this word for word,
But nonetheless, his statement was absurd.
Pakistan has been an ally for quite some time,
Alongside the U.S., partners in crime.
Mr. Obama, your plan will not work,
Chaos will erupt, people will go beserk.
Innocent lives will be lost,
And if that doesn’t matter to you, consider the cost.
I used to be your biggest supporter,
Until you said you wanted to cross the Afghan border.
So many invasions already in play,
I sit back and watch, in utter dismay.
I’m glad I watched tonight’s debate,
Now before I vote I must contemplate.
Do I want 4 more years of Bush-like reign?
Or dare I vote to have my Pakistanis slain?
This election has hit close to home,
But until I decide who to vote for, I must end this poem.
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5 comments:
very powerful Saira. thank you for writing. I hope others read it. It's important to go a little deeper with both candidates' responses re Pakistan before you completely make up your mind.
Wow Saira, you made a very true, and valid point. I never thought about it from that perspective, and it does make me think. This was a very well-written poem and I truly appreciate it. I know I can't possibly understand what you're going through but I hope your heart and your mind help you make the right decision. --Caitlin
I want to thank you for your words of truth. We must look at everything the candidates say, and make sure to take it to the heart. Because whoever is chosen, there decisions well effect each and every one of us. From a personal level, even down to the emotional level. Thank you again, for these beautiful and inspiring words.
Your poem was well written and expressed deep emotions. You should submit your poem to Broadside to be published. Thanking your for writing a heartfelt poem!
great poem....i need to re-read the transcript b/c i totally missed his statement about Pakistan...
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